^^ that's really good. and... i'm running out of interesting tidbits to say. I read Ella Enchanted, and i know what part you're talking about. Good book too, but i hadn't realized it was supposed to be a Cinderella story and I was disappointed by that ending, and then I read that a year later or whatever and wondered how i could be so stupid as to not realize the hints... oh well, it was a good poem!

OOh I like this. I like the way it feels like youre on a journey. and I like the kind of "twist" at the end cuz it starts off quite happy and sort of ends up sad. You should write more of this type of poem because you're good at it =)

I think it's really nicely done! ^.^ It has great feeling and emotion behind the words, and flows well. Nice! (By the way, thank you for your nice reviews! -^____^-)

very nicely written i loved it! maybe i should try to write a poem like that.....