|Reviews for Why Do I Cry?|
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 6/3/04 . chapter 1
aw, this is so sad.
No need to speak,
Because I will just fuck up again.
It's makes me sad, cause people do feel like that. Tis, a good poem
| IHavePizza 5/14/04 . chapter 1
I loved the way this flowed.
| lostrunner 1/28/04 . chapter 1
Aw, you poor thing! I know just how you feel. The whole Little child, no longer wild... Whoa. I can totally relate. good job.
| TearsOfTurquoiseAngels 7/25/03 . chapter 1
I really like this poem. You are very talented. I can definatley relate, though it is hard for me to cry at all lately. I put you on my favorite authors list.
| DarkPhantom0286 12/13/02 . chapter 1
I really like this one, you are very talented, I shall read more of your work :o)
| Blue6-Blood66 12/1/02 . chapter 1
"The man above,
He shows no love,
Only emptiness- is this why I cry?"
I believe that God saves no one, helps no one - only watch us give out our pain and symphatizes to the billions of us.
anyway... with the poem.
As usual, it is a good poem. anyone can honestly relate to this.