I can relate to this one, I love the beginning of each stanza and the last lines of each the most. Beautiful.
keep writing-
til-iburnout

I loved how you wrote "There is no rest for the weary, I am the weary." Something along those lines at the beginning of each stanza. It added something too it and only made the poem better. Very good job on this one, it's one of my favorites.

oh my god.. i love this poem!