It doesn't go together perfectly but I think that doesn't matter with this poem, cause it is being so honest and true. People do patronize, a lot of the time, specially adults to teenagers.
*blushes* I lost my trail of thought. . . maybe I need sleep...
keep writing-
til-iburnout

Again with the scathing honesty. I think everyone can relate to this, and that's what makes a poem great. The ending could use some work, it needs something to connect all the thoughts together, but other than that it's a good piece.