tis a very good poem.
please don't stop writing ever.
i'm now officially addictive to your writing but don't worry I'm not stalker material.
keep writing-
til-iburnout

good job

Hm...tragic, as well as nicely written - the images are very evocative. I like the structure of the rhymes as well...just one thing disturbs me 'a bit' - the thought of suicide...though I felt this way too...

keep a stiff upper lip - hardac