i didn't mean to make you upset, but i'm just afraid to hear if you get hurt after giving this girl, jen, everything and be left with nothing. i've seen it happen to my friends all too often and i don't want it happen to anyone else. this is also the second poem i read by you about jen, so i don't know exactly how you feel.
i'm just a concerned, paranoid girl who's afraid of everything.
but now that i've read this poem (which by the way, is really sweet!) i wish you and jen lots of love and happiness in the future.

aw, tis so sweet!

wow.that was amazing!great job!!I love love poems!!especially when you're in love,it makes them all the better :) keep up the awesome writing!!
~*ScarletDreamer
ps:thanks for reviewin' my work ;)

Wow, you get shut down and move on quick don't you?

It's a great poem. Too bad I never got one like that.

Very nice. Really. Jen is very lucky. Keep on writing.