Very powerful and heart-piercing. The easy flow of rhyme and rhythm make it quite pleasant to read, which contrasts effectively with the "heavy" content. Great job.

deep...really deep...i can kinda relate to it...good poem tho its a bit short..but that's ok..its good short.

I feel this way when people are angry at me... Heh. I love the three stanzas, and how well they flow. You did an awsome job, describing this feeling. *applauds* I love it.
much love
vintage fade

I like it.
If you want criticism... the best verse is the third. The other two are cliche.

I've definately felt that way...and it feels awful, great poem...i really like it...

Leave me with these demons,
That you planted in my head...I love that line.. Well done.

this was an interesting poem... but i really like it. i liked the way you used different words (sorta) that meant the same thing, like rip and tear... nice job!

Jen

Even though its not exactly the same it kind of reminds me of the poem I wrote, called "Personal Sadist." Just the thing about someone else hurting you and stuff...

wow! i loved this one! its great!

I don't find it disturbing at all... I mean, I'm just kind of... like that, I guess. Dark enough, or crazy enough not to. I like this. It's got an angry, bitter quality that doesn't often come through in poetry.

I don't find it disturbing at all... I mean, I'm just kind of... like that, I guess. Dark enough, or crazy enough not to. I like this. It's got an angry, bitter quality that doesn't often come through in poetry.

oooooo... *shivers*

no, sorry I won't kill ya. hehehe -

cool work.