O...I *like* this one...not like I don't like all of them, lol. The last stanza was brilliant. How do you come this stuff?

The two things that detracted from it: the misspelling of "loneliness" and the way the first line in the second stanza rhymed with the last line in the first stanza.

I notice that a lot throughout your poetry and writing-you make little mistakes that should be fixed, but the whole is overall so good that it doesn't matter terribly.

Hope this was helpful,

Sabbrielle