this is a nice sweet little poem. i like it! i don't get it though. you are against Christianity, but you need Jesus? just come back to Him and and He will make fill the hole in your heart, He will make your life full. keep writing!

Awesomeness! I love this, it really illustrates how one feels when convicted by sin and knowing that you'll never be good enough for God. Great work!

Wonderful! I love poems about Christ-this one was simple, but full of beautiful truths. Great job!

What religion are you, within Christianity I mean, BTW?

Another great one!

-Jesus Saves-

Good. I liked the lasat part the best.

Heart of the Sword