such a sad story:'( what disease did aubredy have that killed her?

GOD why couldn't you have left her live?? they do have cures for cancer these days you know and you did mention that she was going to be going to the top ten doctors? talk about crushing reader's hope and hearts...

Cute!

I loved it

I cried really hard at the last chapter. I thought it was a good story and I liked the length. Not long and draggy with contrived drama but just long enough to show the love, and the resolution.

Thanks for sharing with us.

omg! I don't have much time to write much of a review, but I will when i do have the time..

I LOVE THIS STORY! It was so short and I didn't want to let it go! I nearly bawled my eyes out in the last chapter!

Until next time!

Har de har har. I just reviewed, and made Wilson's name Winston. *smacks head*

I hope you get through the personal crisis thing that you have on your lookup, by the way! (But maybe you have already. *shrugs*)

My dear sweet lord, I loved it. LOVED it. And was horrifically saddened by it. *bursts into tears*

Great job! I hate Aimee! Love Aubrey! And Christian! And Trinity! And Winston! Wo!

i really love your story cried when chris is talked to Aubrey. still crying. you can tell how much he loved her.

wow that was incredibly sad! i just read the whole story in a few hours and here i sit with tears ack! it takes a lot for me to cry too. You did an awsome job and aimee is evil lol. Nice work

Wow! Great story! I really really enjoyed reading it. I loved the story line and the way you developed your characters was awesome. The apce is perfect. You didn't rush through it, but there isn't so much detail that it's annoying either. Really really awesome. Except I didn't really get the title. I love the title, but I didn't see where it fit in with the story.Are you a fan of Nicholas Sparks books? Cause this definitely reminded me of something he would write. It was almost like a mixture between A Walk to Remember (with her being sick and dying at the end) and the Notebook (with the letters and everything). I really loved the story though. Except for about 2 things. One, I thought that they should have been at least a little older than 5 and 7 when they were seperated. I find it hard to believe that they would even remember eachother that well from then. And have the thought to give eachother Christmas presents at 2 years old, etc. Like, I love how you did it, but I wish they would have been a little older because I would have had an easier time believing it. And I also didn't like that Aubrey got pregnant before they were married, especially after you put in there that she was waiting until she got married to have sex. I think that you should make them match, ya know? The last chapter was seriously the saddest saddest thing I've ever read. When he talks about setting the table for four and not being able to give her clothes away or move her stuff out of the bathroom. Beautiful. And I also loved how you added the detail about the wedding into the end as well.Beautiful story! I truly enjoed every second of reading it!>>Twizz

i usually wait until the end of a story to read or if its not finished, th elast chapter posted. The finished ones always hold a special place fo rme because they are something that i know is there and has an ending. Somethign concrete to hold it together. This story has been a joy to read. I have read a lot of stories, on this site and in books, but this one truly touched my heart. I started to cry at the end. These characters are special, you were right. These characters are something to miss. I loved the story, from the first page to the last. Even if the ending wasn't happy, or what i would want, this story was worth reading. I thank you for sharing your gift and talent to those who enjoy it. You have creativity. I hope you continue to use it. Keep up the awesome work.

Oh Ellie! I absolutely love this story! You are such an amazing author! No other story has made me cry (yes, i cried at your final chapter!!), and i never cry so thats saying something. you are such an amaznig writer, and i cant wait until you update Him and Her again, i love that story also. This is such a great story, i love it so much. Its so sad! But i love it.

The ending was so sad!! I thought you did a great job though! : )

that was sweet. Sad, but terribly sweet. Drop me a line! River of Innocence Lost has 18 chapters now. 18!! I'm thrilled, haha. Well, great job with this story. I"ll check out some of your others soon.
*~ Vicky *~--*~--

I have a hellofalot of catchin up to do. So wait, perhaps I'm dim, but what did Aubrey's dad find out at the doctor's? Perhaps if I keep bloody reading the story I'll find out, eh? So here I go. Brilliant.
*~ Vicky *~--*~--