Great description, spelling, etc.

Great story in general, too.:D

Well, it is always good to see something different from the usual vampire or axe/knife weilding lunatic storys that keep cropping up.

The reader goes into this with no what to expect, of what the character is like or what he has done to find himself in the situation he finds himself in, in the beginning of this story. Still in the end you wonder what did he do?

Anyway down to the basics, grammer and spelling look good enough with no glaring (or any otherwise) mistakes. The sentances flow along nicely and without distraction.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

Grim writter

Nice, but could use some slight alterations.

I'm scared i'm gonna wee myself i need a nappy (piddle piddle)