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| Ren and Epsilon 2002-12-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat is so sad, it's good, but sad. You used some powerful notions in there. I like it. Alex |
| Dashy 2002-12-04 ch 1,  | abuseI really like it although it's so sad....keep it up Dashy |
| The Rain Child 2002-12-04 ch 1, | abuseu r now my official spokesperson in the likely event of me getting poets' block! Bravo! E-mail me at some point, k? |
| penfin 2002-12-04 ch 1, | abusevery powerful, but kind of confusing. it seemed like a suicide poem until the "to you" at the end...it makes me wonder what exactly you are saying. still awesome job...keep it up! |