That is so sad, it's good, but sad. You used some powerful notions in there. I like it.

Alex

I really like it although it's so sad...keep it up

Dashy

u r now my official spokesperson in the likely event of me getting poets' block! Bravo! E-mail me at some point, k?

very powerful, but kind of confusing. it seemed like a suicide poem until the "to you" at the end...it makes me wonder what exactly you are saying. still awesome job...keep it up!