creepy story. don't know if you should call him an "angel" though. he seems more like a demon of sorts. yeah, well, that's just my opinoin! contiue writing.

yay! keep going with this story, i want to know waht happens!

Great work, slovy, you are morbid, but it is awesome! Keep writing!

I like it!
Thus far, I like the writing style. The concept of "very active wallpaper" induced giggles. It was good.
~S

Ooh... wonderful.... see hoe good this story is when you actually get around to writing in it?

Funny how to save the world he must kill everyone on it...


Amber AKA Contradiction

Ohh! So good! Off I go to the next chapter! Hehe... you said sinuous.

Amber AKA Contradiction

Ah... There is finally more, keep it up!

Wow, I think you're disturbed in many ways...keep it up. This story has definitely caught my interest. Only one little prob, the switch of narration in your second chapter was not clear and I was confused until I realized it was someone else. Yes, I know, I totally disregarded your chapter title. But whatever. I enjoyed the rest of it and can't wait to here his story. Keep going!

Very good but if this is sopposed to be biblical It seems far fetched.. I mean the apocolypse has to do with the Antichrist etc. I loved it though. I love to learn of fallen angels and demons and such and the Angelic Wars that are going on right now. Very cool.

Please, just stick to one narrator. Would it be that hard? I love the story, but the narration is confusing!

Very nice, but I would ask that you stick to one narrator, please.

I like it. It's well written and the theme is very good. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!

this is the PSYCHO MIME, signing off for the last time_

Can't wait for the next chapter.

--Ti