 Ahmed 2003-07-02 . chapter 1 What I got from this was, somebody not wanting to be alone. Calling out for help, trying to go about it cooly, but inside they felt nothing but pain without whoever they were calling. Wanting them back, but having to let them go. There's a message here, but its hard to pick up, but it makes me think, and things start clicking faster and faster, making it a good peice. I had to seriously stop and really, really think about this, normally things start making sense quickly, but I liked this one. Confused, hurt and feeling empty is what I get from it, a good poem all in all |
 Just A Friend 2002-12-05 . chapter 1um... you feel like this? well, i don't know what to tell you, i've never been in that position, but my friend has... sort of.
this was very good, and i hope things with this girl (if she is real) turn out ok. |