i just wondered - the last line "Well that's how I tell the story, who's going to know any different." Is that hinting that maybe it had something to do with the person telling the story? answer me through a review. anyway its very good. i think you could make it longer and it would be really good

This is really good. Sort of a...random story but hey, aren't they all? lol Actually this was creative and really good.

I also wanted to tell you that I took your advice. Your review of my story, Road Trip, got me thinking. I listened to what you said. I made a sequel, set a few years into their future, probably called Undeniable.

*smiles meakly*

I'd love if you would read and review it, see if it's up to your standard? lol

Rock On

Beau Coeur