Creative! The beginning - "Une fois / I remember how you said to me / J'ai besoin de toi / As if I mattered to you" - is especially beautiful. ) "And I was left alone / Encore une fois" )

whoa! I loved how you mixed the French and English together so nicely. I'm really bad at reading French, but that was pretty good. I liked how bilingual that was!

oh, que je l'aimais. c'était émouvante et très forte comme poème. la juxtaposition entre l'anglais et le français est vraiment inspirée (malgré les fautes de grammaire on français, et c'est certain qu'il y en a). la thème me frappe et t'es très douée comme poétesse.

C'est bon! Je ne peux pas ecrire en francais, mais je peux lire un peu, et peut-etre j'ai comprendu un peu... Je l'aime!

Hey, your french is pretty good! I mean it is better that some people at my school...and it's a french school...anyway it is good, the poem and the french...and trust me i know what i say, Im french,_...anyway, I'll stop blabbling about me and I'll tell ya one more time, good job, and Ja ne, Mistal

Wow! Ur stuff is great as usual. I cant wait to see the next story/poem you come up with. KEep up the great work.

Great poem! The French sounds right to me... Of course, that doesn't mean anything. I never was good at French, though my parents forced me to learn it. Anyway, I love this!

Alas, my french is not good enough for me to read this and give an honest opinion...