Great poem. I know how you feel.

Wow, deep stuff hun. Why must you always sound so depressed? Well, anyways, i think that you should make the rest of the poem rhyme if you start rhyming. that only happened in three paragraphs though. Good job Andrea, i like the internal battle-warrior thing. cool stuff :)

Love

Megan Dansby

WOOHOOO! yes, indeed, prisoner within yourself, know how you feel... But we get by, slowly, day by day, right? Each is a raging battle, provoking the frustration deep within. But don't worry ^_^

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I GET REVIEW MY OwN STUFF!!
and i must say--that i think its quite good ^_^ keep up the good work self!
POWER TO THE PENGUINS!

Great poem, Andrea. I love this one. Hope you don't mind if I borrow it to use as an away message...I'll mark it as yours, though. :D

good poem
as for the penguin thing. a guy in one of my classes has a shirt that says One By One The Penguins Steal My Sanity.

haha.....cool. Yesh, I do feel lost within myself. Quite often actually.

~GeN!