Very interesting i love it it was such a pleasant read i loved it.

I guessed! It was cute! I liked it. Richard was being kinda jerk-ish, but he's still awesome.

Wow. It's kinda creepy that the demon chick/guy that has a thing for Raven calls him "little brother"...But it's good. I kinda like Sharael.

Aw, I love this story. The only thing is, that you use "bare" instead of "bear." Like, "I can't bear this." You did it in your other stories, too, but that's the only thing wrong. Everything else is perfect!

Aw...how did he survive? Did one of them die instead?

Do I even have to say it? I LOVE these two to DEATH!

Wow. Again, I love them to death. And I was sure it would be the other way around, with Raven being eager and 'Ricky' being not ready. I like how you did this, though.

Wow. I love these two. They're kinda adorable!

Wow. This is good! And a change from the ones about Kirash and co. This ones in modern times, and in 1st person. It's good! And well written.

You have a really nice style, very suitable to the genre. It looks like some of the letters are cut off words and some words arne't spaced correctly, but I don't see any major mistakes. :)

The pet names - just the sheer quantity of them - are killing me though. Raven didn't seem so... gay, I guess, in the first chapter, so a mild continuity issue, but I like it a lot :). Definitely adding to my alert list.

Ah, this was adorable! And it had a happy ending! :D I liked Sharael the best ^^ Crossdressing demon, ftw! I had a lot of fun reading it ^^

AHH
such a cuute and awesome story!
WELL DONE
loved it ^_^

o.O Is it really incest for cousins to marry? I never thought that way ... but then I didn't grow up in a western society. You know Europe and Asian and most of the globe except North America have absolutely no problem with cousin marriages, many countries actually favour marriages within the family. Canada and Mexico has no restrictions, and 26 states of USA has no restrictions. (since the rest of USA restricts cousin marriages, I'd guess there'll be some people that frown upon it in western society ...) I never thought of cousins as incest ... And I haven't encountered the topic since living in Canada ... Kind of strange that Rick would react so badly.

Cute, happy ending :) I enjoyed reading this story. I must check the other ones.

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ah... I couldn't figure out that link either... and I wanna read that part :(( I love this story... will review some more...

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