LMAO! I love falling like that...and the ending is hilarious.

ah, the feel of flying before death. How i wish i could feel that.

I love the end! hehehe. it does make it seem like she's falling off a cliff, not a swing, though. i still love it. you really captured what its like to fly through the air like that. Awesome.

Luv me.

Haha... Maybe I shouldn't laugh but it's kinda funny in the end.

I think this poem is good _

Holy SH*T - oh well, they probably deserved it. o_o wait a sec...

I really liked this one. Short, simple, dramatic, fun _

lol! did she fall or something?

nice job MIRRIOR-KOI (i still like sushi better)

i put some new stuff up please R&R!

you better put some more stuff up!

i'm waiting...stil waiting...any second now...

Sushi-san out!

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maybe it shouldn't have been funny but the THUNK *was* funny-for me, anyway _

very "innocent" and fresh.

It made me go O.o but I like it a lot. . .funny in a bitter sort of way.

WOW..this poem reminds me of when you are little and wish you fly, and just get away form it all. But then reality hits you and thunk..you remmeber you can't fly..hehe..see i looked at your poems..

sunnybuns