Absolutely stunning! I love the tory so far

OH! End to part one! *frowns at the author* It's been more than a couple monthes! Where's part two? o_O; I'm glad that Kaze is out of the way. I didn't like him. -_-; More slash goodiness would be good! ^_^; Okie, bye!

o_O oi... what was that all about? I don't think the emperor will be too happy to see him though... -_-

um... well, who the leviathan is is pretty obvious and um... i blame my inability to notice that on the fact that it's almost midnight... and i don't think i like kaze either... he seems manipulative...

o_O U... the man behind the madness... or the madness behind the man...

and so we get a history lesson! ^_^ Who is the Leviathan for this current monarch?

oh neatness... I read another story like this... it was shounen ai/yaoi ish too. okay@ next chapter!

*claps* very good! very good! please continue!

You are a very talented writer, I enjoyed reading your story very much.
respectfully,
Marah

P.S.
My favorite elements are water and fire, so your combining them the way you did was very interesting.
I hope that somewhere on this site there is a continuation of your story; as I will greatly enjoy reading it.

This is pretty good. I'm serious, it is!
Original plot/idea very unusual and intriguing.

Thank you for the review! I understand if you didn't like it since I have a rather unusual writing style. New things will probably be added or existing parts flushed out as the story continues (and is eventually finished) but I'm afriad its not going to be totally re-written. I have way too many other stories waiting for their turns (or to be finished) to allow me to do that! (Not to mention that Kerrie would kill me if I dissected it *hides from the rabid fan-girl with the big stick*).

Thanks again though!

I can see where you're going. And you are very creative. And i like ur idea of god king, knights and a bit of yaoi...........but gawd.this story sucks....honestly. either u change it DRAMATICALY or start something new.


P.S
iwasnt being mean ;)