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| dragonflychica 2003-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo...whose wind is caressing you...this is a little...um...suggestive Very funny poem, you really captured the whole trying to be emotional but really just being funny thing. ...You WERE trying to be funny, right? I hope so. Because if you were REALLY trying to be all emotional ... =). |
| The Crazy Cricket 2003-04-19 ch 1, | abuseHmm... You wrote this to win money? Oh well, money *is* a rather encouraging lure to write, isn't it? So did you actually win some, or what? Anyway, this poem is nice. The name kinda made me chuckle, but that's because I'm demented idiot. And if you're not hit by inspiration, you're hit by something, because this thing was very thoughtful. I liked it. You should put the Bible verse in quotes, though. ^_^ Try your hand at more poetry, sometime. You might be better at it than you think! |
| Joflower 2003-03-03 ch 1, | abusethat was really sad! but it was still good! good job! |
| Contia Mirian 2003-01-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem! Hope you won the $! Alas, if I ever get insiration for a poem, it's merely for one line. Very fustrating. Ice |
| CrimsonDreams 2002-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI love your poem!! It's very interesting!! Keep up the good work!! |
| TheSisterSpoonBandits 2002-12-06 ch 1, | abuseenjoyable. and so true ~us |
| Roland Chambers 2002-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's really good, especially if you it's your first poem. |
| Pachinko 2002-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseaaaww, that was so sweet!! it made me cry ;-; you should continue w/ poetry writing |