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Reviews For: The Caress of Your Wind

dragonflychica
2003-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseSo...whose wind is caressing you...this is a little...um...suggestive
Very funny poem, you really captured the whole trying to be emotional but really just being funny thing. ...You WERE trying to be funny, right? I hope so. Because if you were REALLY trying to be all emotional ... =).
The Crazy Cricket
2003-04-19
ch 1,
abuseHmm... You wrote this to win money? Oh well, money *is* a rather encouraging lure to write, isn't it? So did you actually win some, or what? Anyway, this poem is nice. The name kinda made me chuckle, but that's because I'm demented idiot. And if you're not hit by inspiration, you're hit by something, because this thing was very thoughtful. I liked it. You should put the Bible verse in quotes, though.

^_^ Try your hand at more poetry, sometime. You might be better at it than you think!
Joflower
2003-03-03
ch 1,
abusethat was really sad! but it was still good! good job!
Contia Mirian
2003-01-15
ch 1,
abuseGreat poem! Hope you won the $! Alas, if I ever get insiration for a poem, it's merely for one line. Very fustrating.
Ice
CrimsonDreams
2002-12-31
ch 1,
abuseI love your poem!! It's very interesting!! Keep up the good work!!
TheSisterSpoonBandits
2002-12-06
ch 1,
abuseenjoyable. and so true

~us
Roland Chambers
2002-12-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's really good, especially if you it's your first poem.
Pachinko
2002-12-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseaaaww, that was so sweet!! it made me cry ;-; you should continue w/ poetry writing
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