Reviews for The Old Man
target bath 4/29/03 . chapter 1
mm...its fabulous
Nerilka-chan 4/15/03 . chapter 1
It left me smiling, hopefully what it was meant to do. -Nchan
Smile for insanity 4/14/03 . chapter 1
A lovely glimpse of the future, or you just haven't come to terms with the fact you are color-blind.
wheresmydopamine 4/2/03 . chapter 1
This is sweet. I love your work.
charredrose 1/23/03 . chapter 1
this is so... *frustrated sigh* GOOD! i don't even know how to say it... it's so random, it gives us a sense of something, something that we can't comprehend. ohh, just inspired myself... anyways, keep writing!
Werecat99 1/23/03 . chapter 1
That was very beautiful. I kind of like the crazy ones too...
Not So Soft 1/5/03 . chapter 1
...I did not get it. But thats okay! *skips away merrily*
Broadwaypoetess LaBloodyRose 12/29/02 . chapter 1
*chuckles* Okay, Aftertaste...

George: The sky is bronze, dammit! BRONZE!
Slim 12/17/02 . chapter 1
hehe! That was funny. I really liked how you wrote it. - Very good!

*slim*
Angelic Hooligan 12/13/02 . chapter 1
*laughing* I like.
breakdown in the waiting room 12/12/02 . chapter 1
*giggles hyserically* I liked this! Very nice, how you wrote the lines. That always makes poetry read better, IMO. Ending is magneficent ;)
Wolfychann 12/9/02 . chapter 1
Nice little bite of life... have you read "The Giver," by Lois Lowry? This poem really reminded me of it.
Ann Lee 12/8/02 . chapter 1
::lh:: I like it. -_. lol.
Needa S 12/8/02 . chapter 1
Lol awesome job! Keep writing.