   target bath 2003-04-29 . chapter 1mm...its fabulous |
 Nerilka-chan 2003-04-15 . chapter 1It left me smiling, hopefully what it was meant to do. -Nchan |
 Smile for insanity 2003-04-14 . chapter 1A lovely glimpse of the future, or you just haven't come to terms with the fact you are color-blind. |
 wheresmydopamine 2003-04-02 . chapter 1This is sweet. I love your work. |
 charredrose 2003-01-23 . chapter 1this is so... *frustrated sigh* GOOD! i don't even know how to say it... it's so random, it gives us a sense of something, something that we can't comprehend. ohh, just inspired myself... anyways, keep writing! |
 Werecat99 2003-01-23 . chapter 1That was very beautiful. I kind of like the crazy ones too... |
 Not So Soft 2003-01-05 . chapter 1...I did not get it. But thats okay! *skips away merrily* |
 Broadwaypoetess *LaBloodyRose 2002-12-29 . chapter 1*chuckles* Okay, Aftertaste...
George: The sky is bronze, dammit! BRONZE!! |
 Slim 2002-12-17 . chapter 1hehe! That was funny. I really liked how you wrote it. ^-^ Very good!
*slim* |
 Angelic Hooligan 2002-12-13 . chapter 1*laughing* I like. |
 breakdown in the waiting room 2002-12-12 . chapter 1*giggles hyserically* I liked this! Very nice, how you wrote the lines. That always makes poetry read better, IMO. Ending is magneficent ;) |
 Wolfychann 2002-12-09 . chapter 1Nice little bite of life... have you read "The Giver," by Lois Lowry? This poem really reminded me of it. |
 Ann Lee 2002-12-08 . chapter 1::lh:: I like it. -_^. lol. |
 Needa S 2002-12-08 . chapter 1Lol awesome job! Keep writing. |
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