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| target bath 2003-04-29 ch 1,  | abusemm...its fabulous |
| Nerilka-chan 2003-04-15 ch 1, | abuseIt left me smiling, hopefully what it was meant to do. -Nchan |
| Smile for insanity 2003-04-14 ch 1, | abuseA lovely glimpse of the future, or you just haven't come to terms with the fact you are color-blind. |
| wheresmydopamine 2003-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is sweet. I love your work. |
| charredrose 2003-01-23 ch 1, | abusethis is so... *frustrated sigh* GOOD! i don't even know how to say it... it's so random, it gives us a sense of something, something that we can't comprehend. ohh, just inspired myself... anyways, keep writing! |
| Werecat99 2003-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was very beautiful. I kind of like the crazy ones too... |
| Not So Soft 2003-01-05 ch 1, | abuse...I did not get it. But thats okay! *skips away merrily* |
| Broadwaypoetess *LaBloodyRo... 2002-12-29 ch 1, | abuse*chuckles* Okay, Aftertaste... George: The sky is bronze, dammit! BRONZE!! |
| Slim 2002-12-17 ch 1, | abusehehe! That was funny. I really liked how you wrote it. ^-^ Very good! *slim* |
| Angelic Hooligan 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuse*laughing* I like. |
| breakdown in the waiting ro... 2002-12-12 ch 1, | abuse*giggles hyserically* I liked this! Very nice, how you wrote the lines. That always makes poetry read better, IMO. Ending is magneficent ;) |
| Wolfychann 2002-12-09 ch 1, | abuseNice little bite of life... have you read "The Giver," by Lois Lowry? This poem really reminded me of it. |
| Ann Lee 2002-12-08 ch 1, | abuse::lh:: I like it. -_^. lol. |
| Needa S 2002-12-08 ch 1, | abuseLol awesome job! Keep writing. |