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target bath
2003-04-29
ch 1,
abusemm...its fabulous
Nerilka-chan
2003-04-15
ch 1,
abuseIt left me smiling, hopefully what it was meant to do. -Nchan
Smile for insanity
2003-04-14
ch 1,
abuseA lovely glimpse of the future, or you just haven't come to terms with the fact you are color-blind.
wheresmydopamine
2003-04-02
ch 1,
abuseThis is sweet. I love your work.
charredrose
2003-01-23
ch 1,
abusethis is so... *frustrated sigh* GOOD! i don't even know how to say it... it's so random, it gives us a sense of something, something that we can't comprehend. ohh, just inspired myself... anyways, keep writing!
Werecat99
2003-01-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was very beautiful. I kind of like the crazy ones too...
Not So Soft
2003-01-05
ch 1,
abuse...I did not get it. But thats okay! *skips away merrily*
Broadwaypoetess *LaBloodyRo...
2002-12-29
ch 1,
abuse*chuckles* Okay, Aftertaste...

George: The sky is bronze, dammit! BRONZE!!
Slim
2002-12-17
ch 1,
abusehehe! That was funny. I really liked how you wrote it. ^-^ Very good!

*slim*
Angelic Hooligan
2002-12-13
ch 1,
abuse*laughing* I like.
breakdown in the waiting ro...
2002-12-12
ch 1,
abuse*giggles hyserically* I liked this! Very nice, how you wrote the lines. That always makes poetry read better, IMO. Ending is magneficent ;)
Wolfychann
2002-12-09
ch 1,
abuseNice little bite of life... have you read "The Giver," by Lois Lowry? This poem really reminded me of it.
Ann Lee
2002-12-08
ch 1,
abuse::lh:: I like it. -_^. lol.
Needa S
2002-12-08
ch 1,
abuseLol awesome job! Keep writing.
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