Hmm...nicely written, short and to the point.

Props for dealing with a subject most won't tackle.

"No"..."It was taken." I loved that. It describes my happiness. Growing up early really hurts.

'And she left the bedroom, forgot about Mike. She was once again in Katie’s living room,..' I liked this scene change in her mind. Nicely written as if forgetting was that easy.

Good character; especially how you showed that she was wiser or more mature in aspects than they were: 'They didn’t understand things like this. They couldn’t, and it would be selfish of her to make them try.' and 'No one should have to be exposed to that kind of pain, she thought bitterly.' These lines worked really well.

And obviously, good ending. Nice piece.

Really good work. That last line really impacts.

Oh I'm liking this story, it really shows that Becca is battling with her emotions inside. Great job, I hope you add more soon!

O.O I love your writing style ! it shows soo much emotion and is just breathtaking. .

Noelle

i like this story. Please add more. It's great & i hope you add more. Please read my "The Choose" story. I think you'll like it. I got some of my ideas from some of your stories. I didn't take anything, but I got ideas. So I hope you read & review my stuff. Cool story. Write more. I know I already said that, but I don't care.

Interesting, it's really good.

That almost made me cry. Beautiful, I'm going to add this to my favorites.

this had the perfect ending... "it was taken" you could have easily given a simple yes or no, but stead, you gave it so much more meaning by giving a seemingly simple question a complex answer. Also, the way you moved back and forth between the party and the event and the girl's thoughts really brought the stress she was feeling into play. I also love Becca's mood swing as she decides how to answer..it's not the scared, frightened girl experiencing the event-it's a harsh, bitter girl hit hard by the event.

this had the perfect ending... "it was taken" you could have easily given a simple yes or no, but stead, you gave it so much more meaning by giving a seemingly simple question a complex answer. Also, the way you moved back and forth between the party and the event and the girl's thoughts really brought the stress she was feeling into play. I also love Becca's mood swing as she decides how to answer..it's not the scared, frightened girl experiencing the event-it's a harsh, bitter girl hit hard by the event.

My god..
This is an amazing story
I can see it happening..
a friend of mine was raped when she was only nine too.
Great work..
.andrea.

its good

Oh gosh. This is so sad.
"No," she finally replied quietly, her voice holding an enormous amout of carefully concealed pain. "It was taken."
I loved that line. It's so... powerful and just so... strong. So memorable.
Great work.
Sweet Sorrow

thats really good, because you portray the thoughts and emotions and reactions sort of like they are...you should add more though..there should be a happy ending. I understand what becca went through...i want a happy ending for SOMEONE at least.