I read this after the play. It was interesting to see how the two changed. You added some interesting stuff about the parents in the second version.
One thing I like here is that it doesn't tell its Santa until the end, with the first one we know the whole time. I think the second one is a bit more perverse and disturbing with Santa raping(?) the girl at a young age and his monologues, but this one is still good.

*Shivers* A good and creepy story. Keep writing

...scary...very scary but cool 0.o

Well, I was gonna ask if Erin was the little girl- now I know. Gruesome end, no? dreamer, huh? Are you sure that this story wasn’t an exaggerated nightmare? Just kidding, I know it’s horror.

dude, you rock! love it. um...you quoted jekyll and hyde wrong though. it's "sleep my poor tormented love." other than that, very kewl. i love you! just not like that, cause ew, i don't even know you. unless you're that one stalker person that i can never see very clearly. but oh well. and yeah, sure, i do know you, but oh well. who really cares? ok, i'm babbling. biyo!

Now that... was some freaky David Copperfield shit! That was really good! Scary - Yes. Especially now coz I'm alone in the house in the dark and... what was that? Bells? There's... somthing on the roof!

9/10!

i knew santa was evil! lol. i love this story, very chilling and very, very creepy. great ending too. a little more detail would have been nice, but oh well, the quality remains.

I like it. I like it a lot but, I don't know... it's lacking someting I can't put my finger on. Other than that it's good.

silly, that's hecka mean, you're posting the next chapter soon, yes? good.

you are sooo morbid friend of mine that i almost just named, i love your work though, i love the idea of the stalker thng, and i love the eye description.

AHH! this is really good. i Love it. The stalker reminds of a SC lol. ;0

Hey! I loved this story..it's so..sinister. ;] Great writing (as always) and I hope you continue it.

J.T.

oooh interesting. going along a little fast, but i dont mind. :) yes, damn indeed that nc-17 rule. such a pest, it is. but anyways, great work. keep writing. ill be back for more.

Oo. [ jEN ] .oO

I love this story. It's so good. I want toread more, so please, I'm begging you! Write more!

wow creepy, cant wait for more. is that guy the one who was watching her? contacts are amazing. hee hee. i wear sunglases on cloudy days, its called being optomistic. great story_