Powerful rhyhming, along with catchy lines! There are some things that will never change ^_^ nice job, Della.
~Caelestius Zaden

This flowed really well.


~Heart of the Sword

It has a nice rhythm to it. Makes me wanna read and reread, again and again.

I love the rhyming. Such talent it takes to rhyme.

Don't set a date, do you? That's how I kept myself from doing it. Told God if things weren't better in a year, I was giving up. And, well, things got better. So I hope that helps you, if only a little. Hang in there, you're one of my few reviewers. I need you! :)

P.S. I know, I make light of things that shouldn't be joked about. Such is my way.

I've read it over a couple of times now. Very deep, makes me want more of the same stuff.

*puzzled look* when your english teacher tells you what it means, tell us? it sounds like freedom fighters, and saying they're no better than the supressors now, and then rushing on to live life *shrug*

Very interesting. Usually when I say that i'm being sarcastic but I'm not this time. I like it. Good job. Nothing more to say. Nice work.
Loco Bailando.

True, true! Rant on, rant on!

Wow, this has utterly confused me. But it's good, I know that... It's just confusing... anyway, that's the way to go - don't think about what you write, just write.

Nice...