 lily22 2003-01-10 . chapter 1That's great! You've really captured writing in writing... gosh that sounded corny. But still, this was perfect! Great job! :) |
 Fred Dumpling 2002-12-22 . chapter 1Yep. Got that right. That's exactly how I feel, except for me, writing is staying up three hours past curfew making a super-cool story that has to be a series because it has no end and getting carried away with too much action and a story that moves too fast. >_ |
 ^.^ 2002-12-16 . chapter 1 is very very very good.... *feels she should say more, but can't think of the words* |
 Indigo Tantarian 2002-12-10 . chapter 1Wow, this is... wow. True, accurate, great, wonderful. Great! I completely understand and can relate to everything here! When I try to drop my characters or make them do something they just don't want to do, they make me stop. Shadi's surprisingly opinionated... And I don't think Ankh and Scale will ever leave me alone again. Not that I'd want them to. This is SO great. You should really write more like this! |
 Tigerwolf3 2002-12-09 . chapter 1Wow, Talia... Spike told me that this was good, but... he didn't do it justice.
Spike: Yes I did, pet. I was singin' your praises to Tiger, and Buffy last night. *grins*
Well, yeah. Okay, he was. lol.
Spike: Thank you.
Yeah yeah. Anyway. Great job!!
Spike: You're an amazin' writer, pet. Don't you forget that. *smiles*
He's right. |
 Ophelia Glace 2002-12-08 . chapter 1i'm crying, right now.
my god, you've touched it. i...
(hang on, i have to compose myself)... when i was a little-r kid, i used to "carry" my characters in my pocket, so, even if i couldn't write, if they had something they needed to tell me, i'd know. |
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