yes, sorrowsdescent, toujours means 'always' in French.

another masterpiece on your part my friend...

i totally agree with you - that's exactly how I view things. Meanwhile my parents insist on labeling me an atheist, but...ah, well. You've hit the nail on the head - captured the pettiness, cruelty, and self-absorption that is 'God' in a neat little nutshell. Of course, even though I feel like Humilde, I would probably 'fall in line' in the end out of pure fear. Cos if God doesn't care enough to spare us suffering on Earth, I don't want to see Hell. Though I do imagine dying and going to Heaven only to have God laugh hysterically and go, "Gotcha! There is no Hell! Earth is Hell!"

Guess that would make George Bush the devil.

p.s. does Toujours mean something in particular? It sounds vaguely French, ma non parlo francese, so...

Interesting. Very good writing. I don't want to sound egotistical, stuck up, pompous, or anything, but you're one of the few who can actually write. Toujours...well, he seems like a god. Maybe even the devil, who I believe is also a god in a way. Toujours is not a very nice one, but who knows what god is really like, right? Who doesn't know if the devil is the only god, or if god is not nice, but bad? However that may be, this was really good.

I think I'll be reading more of your stuff...