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| Kittentits 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseAre you ever going to put this story back up?! |
| neongoldtooth 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseaww i miss this story. im still wishing for an updated version of it. |
| Pyjamapants 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseput it back up!...you know you wanna... |
| AngryRex 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI'm still hoping you'll republish this. |
| Insomiak 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseKyahh. xO Why wouldn't you post it again? It gives me a reason to not do my homework! ...it was awesome, man. One of the best here, because it was deep but not boring xO Blah. I guess its your choice. xP Pax. |
| Sakuri 2006-11-05 ch 1, | abuseI can't believe you took this down!! I'm nearly in tears :( I've read this twice before and it's my all time favourite story on this whole site. I'm so disappointed! Please, please revise and repost this. And if you don't... Well, uhm, i don't know if this request will annoy and/or offend you or something along those lines, but would it be possible for u to email me a copy if you're not planning on putting it back up on this site? Like i said, it's my favourite story and i'd hate never to read it again :( ~ Sakuri x |
| Heart - Plant 2006-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh No! You can't take it down now! I was halfway through it! That's so unfair! You HAVE to put it back up! I'm very glum now... |
| Insomiak 2006-06-03 ch 23, | abuseThat was awesome man xO I actually spazed out over your writing a few times >.> *dork* n'ways, t'was cute and if it had real pages, I'd call it a page turner. o= |
| Roxy 2006-04-09 ch 24, anon. | abuseLove the story. It's been a while since I got a tingly feeling from a story. And I read lots and lots of stories :) Oh, and I totally support your pizza comment. I eat pizza without cheese. And I love it. :D |
| arielle 2006-02-18 ch 24, anon. | abusegood show chap ^^ loved the story bunches. cheers! |
| Sakuri 2006-02-13 ch 24, | abusebrilliant story. simple as. ^-^ ~Sakuri |
| lain 2006-01-12 ch 24, anon. | abuseWell here is my big long review because...I say so. First off, your story was amazing. I loved it. I really enjoyed how your characters interacted with each other, especially Veyt and his ever changing personality. I must applaud you because it has been quite a while since I’ve read something this good. Normally I’ll start reading something and it will lose my interest if it isn’t a one-shot, your story however, did quite the opposite. I was intrigued with how things were going to work out and wanted to keep reading. All of your characters were very well done and fairly easy to relate too. Once more, excellent job. …Now I’m off to check out if you have anymore stories ^_^ |
| astrido 2005-12-10 ch 24, anon. | abusehi,i like your story, but there are some uncleared facts.did andre try to commit cuicide? how did veyt tease the girl so she killed herself? i think that you're sometimes writing too much in enumerations. It's getting confusing who is doing what. and you could make the story much more fluently if you wrote whole sentences. cyu as^^ |
| Sidderiffic 2005-10-06 ch 22, | abuseGET OVER IT ITS TEH LOVE YALL! *in response to whoever said 'that's so disgusting'*POOFtoodlesTJword up. |
| Sidderiffic 2005-10-06 ch 19, | abuse*Grabs head* *is somewhere between DAMNIT VEYT, YOU ROCK VEYT, DAMNIT ANDREA & YOU ROCK ANDRE* *muses*POOFtoodlesTJword up. |