Bravo. this was magnificent. I enjoyed.

He's Perfect and He'll never see. I really like this. you know how to describe poetry at it's best. this has to be one of the best poems I've ver read. Please R/R me when you get aq chance

"What never lives

can never die,

he has wings

but cannot fly."

I felt captured the essence of this. I love this feeling, and hate it all the same and you convey that sense very well, but perhaps too loquacious?

This is wonderful my favorite lines were

'What never lives

can never die,

he has wings

but cannot fly.

Is there a heart

to reach his mind;

oh how could

Perfect

be so blind?'

Well it's one of my favorite parts. The way you pharsed this poem is wonderful.

wow, incredible poem...loved the way you wrote it

OMB this is seriously one of the best poems I've erad on ffn! Great job! It's both well written and has a good point.

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