Reviews for The Tumultuous Crowd

Reviews For: The Tumultuous Crowd

Siddalee1211 2003-01-20 ch 1,	Wow, this poem is great. It has good rhythm, like for reading aloud and for the fast paced and rushing idea of the poem. Your use of rhyme reminds me of my own, but mine is more random. Keep up the awesome writing...so I can keep reading!!!!
aibou 2003-01-14 ch 1,	Oooooooooooo coolies! ^_^ I like this poem a lot! :) Very very nice! ::hugs Clifjumpr13:: Keep writing stuff like this please! ^_________________^ ~Aibou P.S. - :) Thanks for reviewing my poem! ...And by the way, you're not crazy, insane, etc.! :) You're normal...especially if you compare yourself to... me! ^_^ I am oddness. :)
DarkDobey 2003-01-14 ch 1,	.........Intresting I like how you made it sound like the mob was a bad thing....then it's just to see some actors.
CaramelMacchiato 2003-01-12 ch 1,	Very good for a random thought! Well written, with excellent punctuation, and use of vocabulary! Keep writing! PS: Thanks for reviewing some of my stuff. Could you possibly please r&r my new original fic Dream Awake? It's one of my most important projects and I would greatly appreciate it.
Lucas Harper 2003-01-12 ch 1,	It's almost like a sale rush lol. Well done!
JJOny 2003-01-07 ch 1,	You call that poetry? 1) The format was horrible. 2)There was only the never ending drone of monotony to keep me awake. 3)There was no passion. You were obviously half asleep whan you wrote this. I'm glad you realize that this probably should have been locked up.
axania chic 2003-01-06 ch 1,	kinda reminds of a gig like the mosh pit kinda hm probz me lol good poem axy ps table is kinda related 2 a seagull lol
Kittioto 2002-12-30 ch 1,	Hmmmnnn... cool. ^^ Well go ahead and shoot me. I over-analyze almost everything. (Yes, I read your bio - and don't look at me weird just because I ACTUALLY read those things. Hahah... read mine, it goes on forever, bwahahahhaa!! ~More diabolical laughter insues~ Well okay not really but anyway I'm rambling again, blast it all...) What was I talking about? ~Stares at screen dumbly~ ... OH yeah. Your poem. Righto... ANYWAY, despite the fact that most things I over-analyze to no merciful end, I'm not entirely sure what to think about this poem. ~Blinks~ ... So... sorry about the entirely pointless review... I guess... ~Sweatdrops~ ... UM... I'll just let you get back to your life, now... ... Although for an excuse to say something in normal reviewing standards, I enjoyed the last four verses the most!! ^_^ Nicely done!
Becky 2002-12-18 ch 1,	Oh I like! It all fits great together!
obsidian katana 2002-12-17 ch 1,	wow...great poem! i really like it!nice and descriptive, how i would imagine a crowd to be. good job! keep writing! and thanks for the kind review!
ChickenRun 2002-12-15 ch 1,	NOTE: Sorry this is late, my keyboard was broken.... Anyway... Well, well, well... I thought this was just neato. I did read your other stuff as well and I thought the story La Guerra del Sol was pretty damn good too. However I don't think it would be very helpful to have reviews from one person all over all of your works so I chose this one cause it was the first one I read, being that it also had the least amount of words. Anyway... to get on, I like your work, and please continue to write your original poetry as it is so rare to find good poems on this site that aren't about death, suicide...snore Oh and by the way.... Mr. Terve McGee is my sister and she just happens to be insane. the text is a rant from American Psycho, so perhaps you'd like to write to Mr. Bet Easton Ellis and ask him how Patrick Bateman plans to pay for it.
Lemon Drop 2002-12-14 ch 1,	I like it. I do. I'm glad its not too deep, because i am confused easily. lol. nice job, Lemon drop Ps; its late and my fingers are cold, so im not much for punctuation or grammar. sry.
Rhyssa Dragonlady 2002-12-13 ch 1,	This is really good! yay! well done on the rhythm and the rhyme scheme, this is good
psychochick3 2002-12-09 ch 1,	Yep, you need to be locked up. Now you have to put up with the rambling delusions from my mind. Sounds like either an after Thanksgiving Christmas sale or an N*Stinks concert. Both are from hell.
Whisper to the Water 2002-12-09 ch 1,	Wow! That's good. I've never had crowds clamoring to see me onstage...more like OFFSTAGE... Btw, it's "forestall." Nice brand new post!

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