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| Kuradok Evangeline 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseI hate yams. Lovely layout and very interesting dialogue. Keep up the good work |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseHm reminds me of my home in some ways around the holidays. A very sweet peice, capturing the deliciousness of the meal and emotions wavering. You have a lovely way with poetry, sort of making me crave to read more. P.S. I hate writing responses to my own reveiws in anothers reviews, but you didnt have an e-mail address I could respond to. The sky in my piece, Blind innocence, the rouged and flushed like a virgins first kiss, was to describe the colors of a sunset in comparison to a sunset, red against the blue. Anyways thank you for your comments I appreciated them. |
| and flowers 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuse? it comes off as a bit grotesque. would you agree with me? |
| BlueRose218 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abusevery disturbing...and now I'm feeling rather ill... you ended this really effectivly (I don't think I spelled that right) |
| The Asian Banana 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseignoring the carcasses among the silverware. This line very scary! LOLOLOLOLOLOL! I don't understand, but it is funny! ~Check out my story with Chiquita-san! It is quit hot but not scary! Like this thing! LOLOLOLOLOL |
| vonlan 2004-06-28 ch 1, | abusei read it trying to understand it fully but it was kinda hard for me. i've read this poem about 3 times before and now i finally see what you're talking about..slightly. hahaha. |
| Kaliella 2004-05-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is neat; it really gets the point across to the reader of how you feel about eating meat while not saying in any exact words what you are talking about. Very eloquent. |
| distantdistorteddisturbed 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting topic. I find the flow and imagery very unique. Nice imagery. |
| orangefreak33 2003-10-31 ch 1, | abuseIt's wonderful! There's so much imagery, and it gives the poem so many dimensions. The title almost reminds me of an Arrogant Worms song - "Carrot Juice is Murder". Check them out, they rock. And they're Canadian, and so am I! |
| Jenny 2003-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think this is the perfect blend of insanity and death... wonderful *applauds* |
| kalmia raphael 2003-08-11 ch 1, | abuse*shudders* this is seriously good stuff. no real rhyming scheme you have there, but theres good flow... made me feel like someone was sitting in front of a fireplace, telling a story to kids... *coughs* gotta adore free verse. who needs a set number of lines? *scoffs* yes. humans celebrate Christmas with a feast by killing more creatures... somehow I thought of cannibalism reading this o_o I'm sure there's more to this poem that I've managed to notice. Are these people so well provided for and should they try to share the wealth? |
| Sticky Footed Tree frog 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's interesting. Thanks for reviewing a bunch of my stories, I really apreciate it. Where'd the title come from? Very interesting... I don't think I'm going to be able to eat for a while, don't want anything gross to happen ;) |
| FlyingPhish 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abusewhoa,that was splendid. At first I looked at your story thinking, hey, death to yams, interesting title. So I took a peek. The meaning is profound. I think I'm one of those people bloated at the table, often I find myself stuffing my face with yams. Boy do I love yams. |
| Lover4Green 2003-07-14 ch 1, | abuseawesome poem! U teach my friend Rocket BOy (check his poems out!) how to write cuz he needs to improve but there good also keep it up! |
| beautifuletdown 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI could've sworn I'd reviewed this. Well, I love it. The flow and wording is excellent. |