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Shimagami 2003-10-11 . chapter 1
You won't ever fade Fuu. Just hold on:

All it is is that feeling inside,
it fills your soul your very being
with every single breath.
If you just hold on to the soul of all creation and the wind of quiet will come and ease the passing...

Opps! Am I writing poetry in a reveiw? Sorry! But than again...

~Shimagami~
^__^
Dana 2003-06-05 . chapter 1
I love this naration and I love the voice you use. It is formal yet conversational. There is a definite tone of sadness. Very nicely done.
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