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| defy destiny 2007-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseOh, i really hope you update this soon, it's such a good story. I love Kieran and Adrien, they're such believeable and likeable characters. Please continue this ^_^ |
| Jumpin Jellyfish 2007-01-29 ch 29, | abuseI love this story. It has adventure, political scandal, mystery and flamboyant baddies with darkly sarcastic assistants. What more could someone ask for? Anyway, I hope you update soon. Hassad has me very intrigued. So is he full elf or half? Hope you can include the unveiling in the next two chapters or so! |
| FlamingDoritos 2006-12-31 ch 29, | abuse*staring bug-eyed at screen* YOU MEAN THAT IT ENDS THERE?! GRAH! THERE BETTER BE ANOTHER BOOK! I'M CHECKING YOUR PROFILE RIGHT NOW! Oh, okay. Coming soon. I'll live But...hurry! ^__^ Man, was it ever fun reading this. You chapters were, I'll admit, a little short for my taste, but maybe my food poisoning's just making me picky. Yeah, that's probably it. I loved reading this and you did an amazing job. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work. And...yeah. That's my tale. |
| nessis 2006-05-25 ch 29, anon. | abuseI really love this story and I'm sorry to hear that you most likely won't be continuing this story, but as you said, life goes on. I hope you'll have a bright future and that you won't abbandon us entirely! ;) |
| Haven36 2006-02-27 ch 29, | abuseThis is a great story and I hope you continue it - especially with this monumental turn of events and the cliff hanger..plus you still haven't clued us into what Keiran is missing! |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 29, | abuse*lone ranger music* And we're off to save the day! Good for Keiran; the name meant something to him. Well then. I've read all you've written on this story in one day, and I concluded two things; one, Argus must die. He sucks. Really. And two, you need to update. I love it. |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 28, | abuseWell, damn. Nothing kills the mood like having a king walk in on you. And I waited, what, twenty-seven chapters for this?Nevermind. I'll get over it. |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 27, | abuse*throws a mallet at Argus, ignoring the fact he doesn't exist* Sometimes villians just make me sick. Although I have to give him credit; he's a damn smart villian. |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 24, | abuseImagining things he's not....It's cool knowing everything. :) |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 23, | abuse.........Same thing as always. I either hate your villians, or I'm amazed by their sense of humor. |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 21, | abuseHassad, you suck. Betraying elves, especially if you are one...Hassad's goin' down. |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 20, | abuseI can't bring myself to hate Argus. He always has the best conversations. Assassination, elves, smitten princes...they have it all. I wish MY conversations were like that. |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 19, | abuseAnd now they're going to blame Kieran right? Geesh. Stupid nobles. Just in case you didn't know, I happen to lvoe this story. Sorry if my comments made you think otherwise. :) |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 18, | abuseNothing will go wrong...famous last words, those. And something almost always goes wrong. |
| Widom 2006-02-02 ch 17, | abuseOnce again, very interesting. |