it feels like I've been waiting YEARS for chapter 23!! please...?

You mean it ends THERE?! I'm loving this story so far! Yeah, Argus should die ^_^
This story is really intriguing, with a great plot and believable characters. Please update soon, it's killing me!

Oh, i really hope you update this soon, it's such a good story. I love Kieran and Adrien, they're such believeable and likeable characters. Please continue this ^_^

I love this story. It has adventure, political scandal, mystery and flamboyant baddies with darkly sarcastic assistants. What more could someone ask for? Anyway, I hope you update soon. Hassad has me very intrigued. So is he full elf or half? Hope you can include the unveiling in the next two chapters or so!

*staring bug-eyed at screen* YOU MEAN THAT IT ENDS THERE?! GRAH! THERE BETTER BE ANOTHER BOOK! I'M CHECKING YOUR PROFILE RIGHT NOW! Oh, okay. Coming soon. I'll live But...hurry! ^__^ Man, was it ever fun reading this. You chapters were, I'll admit, a little short for my taste, but maybe my food poisoning's just making me picky. Yeah, that's probably it. I loved reading this and you did an amazing job. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work. And...yeah. That's my tale.

I really love this story and I'm sorry to hear that you most likely won't be continuing this story, but as you said, life goes on.

I hope you'll have a bright future and that you won't abbandon us entirely! ;)

This is a great story and I hope you continue it - especially with this monumental turn of events and the cliff hanger..plus you still haven't clued us into what Keiran is missing!

*lone ranger music* And we're off to save the day! Good for Keiran; the name meant something to him.

Well then. I've read all you've written on this story in one day, and I concluded two things; one, Argus must die. He sucks. Really.

And two, you need to update. I love it.

Well, damn. Nothing kills the mood like having a king walk in on you. And I waited, what, twenty-seven chapters for this?Nevermind. I'll get over it.

*throws a mallet at Argus, ignoring the fact he doesn't exist*

Sometimes villians just make me sick. Although I have to give him credit; he's a damn smart villian.

Imagining things he's not....It's cool knowing everything. :)

.........Same thing as always. I either hate your villians, or I'm amazed by their sense of humor.

Hassad, you suck. Betraying elves, especially if you are one...Hassad's goin' down.

I can't bring myself to hate Argus. He always has the best conversations. Assassination, elves, smitten princes...they have it all. I wish MY conversations were like that.

And now they're going to blame Kieran right? Geesh. Stupid nobles.

Just in case you didn't know, I happen to lvoe this story. Sorry if my comments made you think otherwise. :)