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Critara's pride 2003-01-27 . chapter 1
Hey! Did you get my e-mail?????? I think it would be much easier to talk over e-mail...... next chapter coming soon...... Oh and if you want to e-mail me I have 2 e-mails! Pick either or both: Appygirl00@aol.com or Fourappygirl@aol.com. next chapter... The battle with the black unicorn! Ah! Who will get hurt??
Promise I hope that *Cough cough* Raven *cough cough* gets killed!!!! whahaha!
Raven: What did you say? (holds up a pointy knife)
Promise: I said I hope nobody gets hurt!!!! Hehe! *Runs* Talaeia! he's hurting me!

G-bye!
Critara's Pride (2 la-z 2 sign N) 2003-01-24 . chapter 1
Hi again!!! I liked this story!!!!! Except, Ariella didn't have enough parts..... Next one, you should name the feline Awww! (like ah)Ariella sounded so kyoote tho. byebye!!!!!
O yeah... chap 8 coming soon....
Critara's Pride 2003-01-23 . chapter 1
Hi!!! 'member me!!! I plan on reading this story... sounds like two girls, tiger, and vamp. But no time now! Anyway! chap 7 is up on Critara's promise!!! Action-packed and full of PIDGEONS!!!! (according to Promise!) u gotta read it. Gets a little wierd....... I PROMISE I'll read this story... o and Promise has a message 4 u...... "Kill the pidgeon!!!!" '^_^
emperor xanderus 2003-01-12 . chapter 1
well well my friend... another strange story from you, however, have you ever been chained to an invisible persons leg, i have. sound familiar?
if not, press this, if so pless that. ok goos story, i can move stuff with my mind by the way, not just any stuff... "stuff"
The HG man 2002-12-13 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was good Red! Really good! But, no... I don't have any evil cousins... well, except for Johnathan who lives in Virginia... But other than that no... But it might have been one of my one hundred clones!(I think I killed them all when they tried to take over the world, but I'm not sure if I got every single one...)

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAhA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Getting a little trigger happy with the sling shot there? HAHAHAHhAHAHA!!!!! And cool! You mentioned me!!! That is so awesome!!!

Well, I bet I can tell Karma was happy! HA!

Well, another really great chapter Red, OH! and enjoy Montey Python and the Holy Grail "We are the knights who formerly say 'Ni'"

Well, read ya later Red!

Hyper Guyver
Karma50 2002-12-10 . chapter 1
Hiya! LOL LOL LOL. Aren't we just such a good team? I think that your airheaded comments and my sarcastic ones mixed perfectly and we created Dr.Evil well didn't we? It wasn't much of a spooky story was it? More comical I think. Can't wait to have another adventure!
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