Interesting read.
So many sentences starting with 'I' was kind of repetetive, but I guess it couldn't really be helped.
Nice, short story. ^^

Well, I am very happy that you didn't feel like doing Mathamatics and Physics just then, because I enjoyed reading your story. I will be on the lookout for more of them...


Freedman

Nice piece of literature here... It's very visual. Keep writing!

seems really nice and somewhat in touch in reality. Is this referring to you? I'd love to know what name Joaquin is, sounds rather, western? Anyway I was flicking through my reviews when I came past yours. I'm not too sure If I've reviewed but I'll do so. Intresting name, and yea, Hishashi is cool.

Hm. . .I wonder what made you choose "Joaquin" as a name for a character? I do like your restrained style; I think it works very well here. And I've learnt something new: I didn't realise Singapore had Belisha Beacons! =;)

I love your style of writing. Your english is very good! :D