oh i just love this one. i love all your work. you're such a great writer. the words you picked and your punctuation made this seem very mysterious and somewhat angsty. i love it! great job

ya should have put this with the depression one...

Ok i like this one
Its so, how can i
describe it, mysterious.
Its like i dunno kinda
two faced (duh) not
the story behind the poem
but the words

Cool. Are you a Gemini or what? I'm pretty sure you're just like that, you know, yigh and yegn, good and evil, light and dark......... Pretty cool.

I like this. I could say that part of this is true for me as I am a Gemini. Good job on the poem.

Pretty cool. interesting use of astrology.