i would have to say that it is a very truthful story. it was well written and I liked it, for being a depressing story like it is. good job.

That was deppresing. In a good way though... good story.

You love this stuff. I swear if it ain't Legolas it's something else and I'm wondering exactly where it all comes from. Wish I had a gift like this, am also just a helpless drone and am VERY glad that LOTR and Fanfcition exists or I too would fall into this poor lady's fate.
Keep it up and tell your friend to write more, VERY good.

Ta ta

Well, I would like to publish this in "Happiness Weekly" if you don't mind ... ;)
No, really, a bit sad, but that's okay in today's society. I like the way you write, but you know that already. Now take my advice and write a book and get famous, so that I can tell people that I knew you before you got famous!

Absolutely touching. The cold harsh reality told in a manner which is nothing short of heart-wrenching.

It was an honour to be part of this dark tale. =)