thats it? no sequal? grar! bad!...well the story was good...the ending was blah!

Oh no! It's the end. But such a great story it was.

YAY...i'm sad that the story is over, but happy because i just got the "beyond the actual written story recap" and it seems to turn out well.

I don't really know why i changed my name, but it's nice to see you were not fooled. ::laughs maniacally for no apparent reason::

Umm...that was a fantabulous ending to a fantabulous story, and i'll see you tomorrow! Alas, now i must go make lemonade...hehe.

heh...I actually KNEW where "ashke" came from. I looked at it and was like, "Didn't Vanyel say that to someone?" Wow. I'm not sure whether to be proud of myself or kind of scared.

So, this chapter WAS sappy, but in a good still-in-the-spirit-of-the-story way. I mean, no body broke character and had a cheesy romance book scene. And I've read quite a few of those--good and bad--so I should know.

Your characters were so cool and ALIVE through this whole thing. I really enjoyed them. I keep thinking that if I moved to the right town I might meet some of them...

Hm. So anyway, now I can't imperiously demand that you update this story, so I suppose I'll have to demand that you start another one!

I'm so glad you wrote this, and it was very enjoyable to read. Keep writing.

Why do I feel a little bit as if I'm signing a year book? Or maybe it's just that it's 3 am. Either way, time for bed. yeah.

congradualtions 101st review!!

to be perfectly honest, i dont think this story was ready for an ending. becca going from crying and spilling herslef to us, strait to a solution seemed too quick. it seems like there should be more, yet i honestly dont see what else you could have put in it. so i think i just talked myslef out of my origninal comment. well written and a good conclusion.

Hehe, I like...I just read the whole thing in one shot (I seem to find the good stories right AFTER they hit 20 chapters... O.o; )...And I want to see what happens! Will she move? Will she stay? What about Matt? Update soon, please!

I've been being lazy with this account, this is the first time i've been on here in a few weeks.

Anyways - I don't want Becca to move! *cries* That would be much sadness. Yay for updating!

btw, i wouldn't hurt you, then you might not be able to write very well...

hey, your back. that was really well done. i enjoyed that, but now we have to find out what puck am jimmy talked about. and that whole moving thing, well . . . i look forward to the chapters ahead.

Oh! I don't want her to move!! NO! Lol, anyways, glad you updated! Keep it up!

Did you have fun in Mexico?? Lol, I was there when I was like three... Don't remember much.

Update soon! And I'll be checking back.

--Stephanie =)

Hey I reviewed and a few hours later you post a new chapter. I think I have magic powers. Wonderful as usual, thanks for reviewing my pitifully short prologue.

YAY! that was a good chapter. I liked the long speeches. And it was longer than usual so good job. I think your writing style must be conducive to shorter snippets. Mine won't do that so I feel less than satisfied if I don't get at least three pages.

Anyway, I thoroughly approve of this chapter. Your characters speak like real people and as I have problems making mine do that, I very much admire it in other author's works.

*ehem*. Back to writing.

i would have hit you very hard and done other things to you as well if you had had her say that.. o'course... then she wouldnt be able to be on the road.. not a stable enough enviornment... so then.. i think matt shouldget her preggers.. that would be amusing. :: thinks:: haha..anyway i think i am going to up date two stories tomorow though you've read one of the new chapters.. :D yay for car trips! anyways...

im going to bed soon.. BYE!

:: prods you with a pitchfork::


update again soon...

This is Jennifer, I reviewed a few chapter ago, I'm just signed in now. Sorry for not reviewing earlier but I've been with out a computer since like the day after I reviewed last. Thanks for thanking me, it makes me feel all loved. Please come back from vacation fast and write the next part.

i think ill finally review this even though i read it when it came out. that explains a bit more. i hope you get over you writers block, cause right now it seems like your trying to avoid moving on as much as possible. thats okay, cause i whink you sould do it hte way you want to do it instead of rushing it. write when you want to. (of course i expect you did something down there in mexico while im up here getting over a stupid cold) so i expect more, but quality . . .

Have fun! Get a tattoo...go to dance clubs and fend off advances from heavy drunk guys...ew. That's what my sister did when she went to Mexico, anyway. And she won a dance contest. They gave her a mug that looks like someone's **. It was quite funny.

Well, if you don't do that, at least take lots of pictures...