I like the sudden change in the ending stanza. Where one would expect it to be repetetive, suddenly you get amethysts... i love it

Awww, I liked this one too! Very nice. Veeeery nice, indeed. It was so melancholy though, but I liked it! ^^


Are you planning to go somewhere?
Lol! Okay...bad joke...-.-; Funny...haha...ha.
Hm. o.o;

hey, kewl. its nifty. u have A LOT of stories. o_o but that's cool too. well bye. (i'm in school rite now, so i dont have much time 2 write)

Awesome! Thanks for your review! Keep writing you are good at it!

A very important question indeed. But you never know what someone would do until it happens, right? And by that time, it's too late . . .

That was beautiful. Very good.

Wow Neko-chan. This is such a pretty poem. WOW! I love it. It's so deep. Keep writing Neko-chan! ;)

makes me think of something I'D write. Even though I'd probably make it darker, but hey *shrugs*