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| chevy-luv 2007-10-18 ch 24,  | abusewow this is really good.. it sucks that you haven't update for so long! |
| chevy-luv 2007-10-18 ch 10, | abusewhat happened to her best friend?? did she just forget about him? :( |
| chevy-luv 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abusewow, this story looks really good!! |
| Strangely Natural 2007-04-21 ch 24, | abusePLEASE PLEASE continue this story and finish it soon please! |
| Britlow 2007-02-02 ch 24, | abuse"Harrison confessing a love for a woman to Nick, breaking both brothers hearts" o i'm definitely intersted in what that is all about!! i absolutely love your story so much, i definitely just re-read the entire thing except i dont think i read this chapter before. anyways i've found some little grammar errors and stuff along the way but didnt comment on them cause i couldt remember which chapters i had already left comments on and i didnt want to seem like a pompus jerk or something hahahaha anyways i hope you update soon! i love it = ) xoxo Brittney |
| youpin 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseGOOD STORY. |
| Em 2006-11-15 ch 24, anon. | abusei really like your story, but i know alot of authors who have been abandening their stories. i was wondering when you are going to update your story. cause i know it was forever before you last updated your story. |
| ELEgant-disasTER 2006-07-21 ch 24, | abuseoh my gosh! seriously, you HAVE to update..pleez? i started crying when i read the last chapter! you have an incredible way with words and it really got to me! i loove this story! Hopefully you'll continue it and have not forgotten it?!?!?! plez update! |
| amm964 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abusem comment number 500?Haven't read it, but sounds really good. And by looking at the other reviews...its prolly imcomplete so...update? |
| emily 2006-03-20 ch 24, anon. | abuseno! i want to know what happens next! plzplzplzplz up-date soon!i would really like that =)! |
| Alenor 2006-03-13 ch 24, | abusei love this story. i really hope that you update. it's been almost a year since you have but still an update would be great. i wanna find out what happens between kay and benji, and what about the stalker? and what it edee and nick's baby gonna be named? i really wish this story continued :) ahh well, if you're still writing please try to update it and if not then that's such a pity because it's such a great story. oh well, cya later ~ luv Alenor. |
| SkateForLife 2006-02-27 ch 24, | abuseIt's so good! U pdate soon! |
| Genuinely-xoxo-Superficial 2005-11-27 ch 24, | abuselikeable characters+development, but sometimes the tenses+sentences don't flow smoothly enough. I also think that robbie was removed from the story rather hastily with all the hospital and cancer business. |
| Queen-Of-Blood 2005-11-20 ch 24, | abuseNO! Nick must live! T_T it would make me very sad if he died. And let's get rid of the stalker dude! he's even creeping ME out. This is an awsome story! Please update soon |
| BeautifulSin 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseWoW! |