 nK. 2009-06-23 . chapter 24 WOW
this is one heck of a story. i really enjoyed it but you seem have to stopped it at a crucial moment =[
love your characters all have an originality to it. you make a cliche plotline (love/hate relationship)interesting.
keep writing cause your a good writer :D
nK. |
 autumn-annette-19 2009-03-16 . chapter 24Whats next, whats next? |
 Knowledge is Power 2009-01-02 . chapter 24why did you add that. all i want to know about is ben an kay. good story |
 SiobhanO 2007-10-18 . chapter 24wow this is really good.. it sucks that you haven't update for so long! |
 SiobhanO 2007-10-18 . chapter 10what happened to her best friend?? did she just forget about him? :( |
 SiobhanO 2007-10-17 . chapter 1wow, this story looks really good!! |
 Strangely Natural 2007-04-21 . chapter 24PLEASE PLEASE continue this story and finish it soon please! |
 Britlow 2007-02-02 . chapter 24"Harrison confessing a love for a woman to Nick, breaking both brothers hearts"
o i'm definitely intersted in what that is all about!! i absolutely love your story so much, i definitely just re-read the entire thing except i dont think i read this chapter before. anyways i've found some little grammar errors and stuff along the way but didnt comment on them cause i couldt remember which chapters i had already left comments on and i didnt want to seem like a pompus jerk or something hahahaha anyways i hope you update soon! i love it = )
xoxo
Brittney |
 youpin 2006-12-30 . chapter 1GOOD STORY. |
 Em 2006-11-15 . chapter 24 i really like your story,
but i know alot of authors who have been abandening their stories.
i was wondering when you are going to update your story.
cause i know it was forever before you last updated your story. |
 Semicharmed love 2006-07-21 . chapter 24oh my gosh! seriously, you HAVE to update..pleez? i started crying when i read the last chapter! you have an incredible way with words and it really got to me! i loove this story! Hopefully you'll continue it and have not forgotten it?!?!?! plez update! |
 amm964 2006-06-10 . chapter 1m comment number 500?Haven't read it, but sounds really good. And by looking at the other reviews...its prolly imcomplete so...update? |
 emily 2006-03-20 . chapter 24 no! i want to know what happens next! plzplzplzplz up-date soon!i would really like that =)! |
 Alenor 2006-03-13 . chapter 24i love this story. i really hope that you update. it's been almost a year since you have but still an update would be great. i wanna find out what happens between kay and benji, and what about the stalker? and what it edee and nick's baby gonna be named? i really wish this story continued :) ahh well, if you're still writing please try to update it and if not then that's such a pity because it's such a great story. oh well, cya later ~ luv Alenor. |
 SkateForLife 2006-02-27 . chapter 24It's so good! U pdate soon! |