This is so good. I can relate. Great work.

.:: bows ::.
Beautiful. very very beautiful. i was trying to write something like that for someone, but i know whatever i eventually come up with will never match up to this. keep up this purdy writing! Au revior!

Madeline

Amazingly done, I'm tearing up over here! I like how you used "You saw me when I was invisable" over and over again. You are a wonderful writer keep it up :)

hello???

I like it alot
sorry i cant critique it but i wouldnt know where to begin most of the stuff i write just comes out

but i've had friends like that
and i know how that feels well done

Yay! I liked it ^_^

wowsies! thats great!!!!!!!! and not to sappy. :)

This is a very good poem! I, myself, cannot write rhyming poems at all... but that doesn't bug me, I'll get better with time... I guess... maybe... Anyway, thanks for the review on my stories. To clear things up, both The Junkyard and Marley were written with a word limit. I still haven't found the time to revise them. Once again, thanks!

^_^

This is really great! I exactly what I feel and think. But I found out that when you think your invisible, your actually not.

This one was really inspriational.... one of those poems that just makes you feel like there's hope and good in the world. It also really sounds genuine, it reflects you well.... i dont really know how it just does. Keep writing as always.

I love it, I really do. It's a very uplifting poem (see? "And when I was low, you took me up again."), and just all around great. Everything flowed and happy and rhymey and worked out great, and even though the form was almost perfect, it still can't come close to the message. Okay. Let me stop babbling nonsensically and sum it up like this:

*JAW DROP!*