Yes. I like this a lot. The first thought that came to mind upon finishing was "this would make a good song." that's always the best sign possible, I think. ;)

I think I like the first and last stanzas best. The entire idea of living for the future generations is probably something more people should embrace. Oh, and I like the one about songs. That stanza flowed really well, I like the idea of happiness playing melodies instead of the other way around. You seem to have a special talent for taking words and doing things with them that most other people wouldn't think of. Very cool.

that was great! really nice message and rhyme scheme... love the part about "but that is no reason to fear them". one part was a little choppy though. it was the stanza starting with 'the bitterness you held inside you' : i dk it just didn't flow as well. just ignore that however, cuz this is going on my fav list!!

I *love* this poem. The words you speak are so true and encouraging. Thumbs up! Awesome! Keep writing.

Great work again, loved the last stanza especially. Why did you have it in quotes though? It was a little strange; it didnt seem to add or take away anything from the story. It was just kind of there. But still, a fantastic poem!

This is a music to be danced to, a 'melody played by happiness'. :-D Awesomeness!

I love this poem, your writing style is very original! Your use of words and subject matter flow well together, and its almost story-like format are exceelent, keep it up!

Beautiful poem, and so very much encouraging!
And thank you very very much for your review, it's really appreciated!
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Very touching poem! I love it! You set this neutral mood in it that just mellows everything out, and I can just hear in the back of my head the bongos and middle eastern guitar that add sound affects! Hehe! Yes I talk a lot.anyways, is this part of a larger story?

This is very, very good. Keep writing. ^_-

^^ I finally got signed in.

That's really cool ^^ it's sounds kinda prophetic.

woah.that hit.That's really good.

Holy moly! This is amazing! I'd half to say that this is the first of your poems that has actually made me DIZZY with shock! This is an incredible piece of writing! How old are you again? You should seriously look into getting this published! Your maturity level must be very high to write something like this!

Beautiful poem. Very well written. I'm jealous as to how well you can write.

Thanks for the review, no though, your guess isn't anywhere near. That's basically the same as everyone elses guess though.

Wow, this is very very insightful for a.. did you say you were 13? Anyway, it's an amazing poem, and a truly inspiring message.

I really like the line "accept the sound of failure's roar," for some strange, crazy reason. I also have a craving for milk, but we won't mention that. *gets up from her computer to get a glass of milk so she can review properly*
Anyway, I really like this, and I like the message as well - that how your actions affect those who come after you is your legacy.
Also, thanks for reading and reviewing "Inhuman Slayer."