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| Shadow Possession 2008-05-23 ch 18,  | abuseOmg! That was so sad! You had me crying! Ack! I want them to be together! They're such a sweet, sweet couple! Anyways, thanks for the great read! |
| ItsEmilyBitch 2008-02-01 ch 18, | abuseHey there. Just stubled upon your sotry, and let me tell you, I loved it. I love Aeralie; she's a lot like me, the tough girl who seems to bottle things up until they tare her down. But, I'm kind of dissapointed. No sequal? I didn't see one in your stories... :( But if you ever get the chance to write one, I'd love to read it. Great job;*Emily |
| twistedfate007 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseI know you've heard it probably a million times by now but i have to say it again: you're story is absolutely amazing! PLEASE, come out with a sequel! I'll be waiting! |
| Cass 2007-05-14 ch 18, anon. | abusei loved it! you need to make a sequel to keep me sane. great story thanksfor keeping me amused for hours. |
| SparklingStar25 2007-04-13 ch 18, | abuseI love this story!it was so sweet.I almost cried at the end.Please write a sequel. i know its been long but the story is so good and I really want to read more so please please please write a sequel! |
| -creative name here- 2007-01-03 ch 18, anon. | abuse'kay, a little late for me to review seeing as this story was finish in the '04, but it was just too awesome not to review xD i loved this and the ending and..everything xD even though it's been 3 years (since it's the 2nd xD) i hope you write a sequel 8D |
| Alenor 2006-10-13 ch 18, | abuseheya, this story is absolutely great. i really hope there's a sequel, i'm gonna go find out, cya later ~ Alenor. |
| anon 2006-06-19 ch 18, anon. | abusewow! review please! pleasepleaseplease. i loved that story. oh my gosh. and that was so incredibly sweet. wow. you rock. i love lucky. ah. yes sequel!! oh and yes. ryan rocks. i seriously love him. wish he was my brother. my twin too. wow. nice one!! (: |
| Amelia 2006-03-11 ch 7, anon. | abuse'I know' is such a good song. correct me if I'm wrong in assuming you heard it off of the '10 things I hate about you' OST? Considering the title of your chapter. Whatever, I'm being a music nerd. Loving the story, nice ideas, and potential fluff, I'm hoping. (just not the covers-you-from-head-to-foot variety of fluff, I hope.) |
| Lisa 2006-03-11 ch 4, anon. | abusehey, I've been trawling through the expanse of fiction that is fictionpress.com, and I found your story. It's really good, and I look forward to reading the rest of it. Kinda coincidental, seeing as I'm getting a french exchange student coming over next week called Aurelié (I think that's it anyway, it sounds like orally) so ... well, there wasn't really a point to that. anyways, cya! |
| tricksters_queen15 2006-01-24 ch 10, anon. | abuseaw! thats so cute! was Lucky the little boy! |
| edgeAndCharm 2006-01-16 ch 19, anon. | abuseI think you should still write a sequel. I know the story is complete but I dont think that means it cant continue in another story that will eventually be complete in itself too. I am not really sure if all that is going to make sense to anyone else but me, so just think about it :) |
| i forgot... 2005-12-26 ch 10, anon. | abusegood story! but i don't understand why ryan calls her anna... |
| jacia 2005-11-23 ch 9, anon. | abuseomg! so sweet! haha. any guy that is willing to get feminine hygiene products for you is the perfect one. |
| jacia 2005-11-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseif all twin brothers are like Ryan, I definitely want one. |