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Reviews For: These Voices

Master Haku 2003-04-17 ch 1,	That was touching...voices are my friends, they talk to me when the world wont... I think you could make a story out of this piece. Write more! pokes
wintersong 2003-03-15 ch 1,	i like this, its very intriguing! :)
Lady Athene Merendra of Cre... 2003-03-13 ch 1,	rating is definatley too high (maybe down to PG-13) However, a lot of people are allured because of the rating whistles innocently and looks at ceiling, so you may want to think it out. interesting story. actually good. one of the better short stories. more like a poem actually. not being very helpfully critical, am I? Sorry. never can put into words what I would change. Good job.
Raekami 2003-02-21 ch 1,	-wave wave- You were kind enough to review one of my written workie things so I'm going to review yours ^^ I like this. Especially the ending. "I do. And they don't like you" XD I love that. ~Rae
citrus scented 2003-02-10 ch 1,	muahahahahaa! everyone knows that the voices belong to me! ^_^ they do. don't the voices like me? shame, because bobby doesn't like you either. We're a bunch of freaky twins aren't we? Im more freakier than you, though. you have to admit. XD
morgie 2003-01-13 ch 1,	a masterpiece a very moving peicie of writing flowing deeper and deeper into this character mind, body, soul. leaving goosepimples on the back of your arms begging for more a cross between pulp fiction and the shinning there is nothing that can be done to round this piece, off, add or change to this without spoiling it you have earnt your reward go and stare at your legolas posters for a while morgie p.s. check out my bio
PaperLanterns 2002-12-14 ch 1,	good stuff. I liked the ending especially. I don't know why, but i picture the character as Gollum. I don't know why. Perhaps it's the repitition of the word 'voices' reminds me of 'precious'

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