Hey you!

I'm procrastinating by going through your old stuff. x]
Anyways, I want to know what happens next! Finish this story!

I like the angst and the drama. Unfortunately I've read neither of the books that you based this format on, but it's very interesting and creative way to write a story. I love all the metaphors and stuff that you use to really convey how she feels about the world.

I miss you! Let's hang out when I get back! If you ever read this... haha. =]

Omigosh! Sorry, sorry, sorry. It has taken me so fetchin' long to review this... it didn't send me an author alert, and I was reading over my poems, and read your review... and yeah. xD SORRY! Anywho, I'm not confused by how you're writing now anymore. :D It's an awesomely original way to write, by the way. The plot twists in this story are crazy, and I just can never guess what's next. :3 Yee, I love Mirror. Do write more soon! It's not very common that a story ties me down without a whole bunch of mushy-gushy-romancey-angst going on, but your's certainly does!

You're new writing style is quite... interesting. It really makes you look more into the words. It's a lot harder to read, but I think that's why I like it. It's an interesting way to write and it's very enjoyable to interpret. :3 I'd also like to say (since my past reviews didn't seem very helpful at all) that I love, LOVE your story. I don't know what the dude below me is talking about (I really don't...), because I think the plot in this story is fetchin' awesome! I love how your characters are all so real, and how you can identify with them. They aren't too nice, or too evil, or anything... they're just... very real. I do hope that you will continue this story sometime in the future (doesn't matter when!) because I'm so stuck to checking this story every day to see if there's been a new chapter! XD I'm addicted... heh. So, yeah. I just wanted to let you know that you're first writing was amazing, and as is your rewrite. Thanks for the awesome story so far!

Wow. Seven or eight chapters without a plot. XDD Well, I can see that your writing style has improved much from January... I think... >_>;

Ari! XD I may draw a picture of him sometime. But, uh, the story finally begins to get interesting! XD Just when you decide to stop writing it... *sigh* Oh well. ^_^;

Continue it! XD

~Wusai

I liked this chapter! ^_^ Ari sounded so cool and well.cool, even though I could predict what could've happened. Work a little bit more on your grammar because I got a little lost. ^^; Other wise you're doing so well. I really like where I think this is going. Keep writing. Where'd you get all of those great Japanese names from?

Boy.I forget what this chapter's about. Hm.! Read it all last night though. Sounds like you really really hate math though. Heehee! XD

Um.you sure sounded like you knew a lot about guns in the last chapter. You kinda freaked me out for a moment there, Mi-chan. heehee That's good that you research for your story though.

So.Ari does drugs and knows how to use weapons. SCARY!! Then he was up all night and still can hit the target. Even SCARIER!! Still sounds really really hot! ^__^

Oh.oops! One review too early, I suppose. Now I don't know what to write for this chapter. Hmm.! ^^; Keep up the good.um.writing. XDD

I'm confused. Is Zenshin 13 years old or in 1st grade? Why was he at school the week before? ::scratches head::

You should draw a picture of Ari. He sounds really really cute. I don't know about Yosai. He's mean.

The stories getting a lot more interesting. That's all I can say. heehee

I think this is pretty good even know I guess it's supposed to be a prologue of some sort. It's funny though because when I read this, I had just learned about sOH cAH tOA in Geometry! ^_^

Ari... you baka... hug her... XD
Poor Minoko! I hope she's alright...
*bites nails nervously*
Hehe... :D Great story!

GR!
-=-Sends her kung fu fighting canaries after Yosai-=- Kill heeeeeem!
-=-dances aorund in joy as they attack him-=-
I liked the chapter because Ari came to her rescue! YAY! But it's sad that Yosai is a dickhead who's also a total looser. *gr* lol

-=-is violent-=- Gotta go! Keep the chapters rolln' in! buh bye!

Moon Moon