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Reviews For: Dragon's Desire
Readasaur 2005-11-03 . chapter 1
*Falls down to hug W.i.t.R.'s ankles, and smile up at you with adoration* Dragon/Knight poem, WHOOT! ^_^ O... it's so classy, and lovely and... *bounces around happily* Thank you thank you thank you thank you so much WitR! I love this! Words cannot express my joy! Thank you! ^_^
Werewolf in the Roses 2003-04-08 . chapter 1
Aw. Thanks everyone. :D
Loganberry 2003-03-31 . chapter 1
I suppose the only thing I'd say is that if you'd put, say "red to blue" in the first verse (letting "eyes" be implied), and "paws to hands" in the second one, you'd have kept the same number of syllables for each first line, which I think would have worked better. Otherwise, I think it's really rather impressive. And certainly much more imaginative than the average yiff poem - which, frankly, isn't hard...
Epk 2002-12-17 . chapter 1
Roses, all I can say is "wow!!"... so very beautiful and truely out of your heart..each one of these poems that I've read have been. Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us, and especially thank you, from me *~*luvins*~*
The Shadow Fox1 2002-12-15 . chapter 1
COOL! I thought of one thing, and you should know already what that thing is!!! MUAHAHAHAHA! This was sweet, Roses, truly it was.
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