i must say, very..what's the word? it just pulled me right in.and i just could hear the song playing in the backround, maybe in his head? and i could just see the moment passing between them, seemingly short, yet with all that suff going through his head.absolutely beautiful. absolutely what i'd expect from an awesome writer like you. i love your descriptions, and just your style in general. you seem to explain it all, succintly, yet with enough detail, and not making it sound like a "rushed" explanation of the past/and his feelings. there union/relationship is also very well explained etc. i loved the way that his thoughts/feelings were all revealed as the song moved on, and how little physical contacts were at teh right places, all so sweet and cherished. ** that doesnt make sense. i dunno how to explain it. but it's awesome. has kat read it yet?!!! keep writing! *m*

im shocked no one reviewed this yet. it was really good! maybe a tad bit confusing. but i only read it once and im sure its only because of that. and i love the song "iris" it went very well with your story...