that i think, is probably one of the funniest and most truthfully brutal things i've read in ages! also, flaws in exactly the right places. although i think you could have imrpoved by writing a bit more. are ya gonna be experimenting more with the joey character? he is *so* cute.

LMFAO. What the hell. That's like a slap in the face and a bucket on the head filled with ice water. Greatness.

funny i love it it's funny

hehe.
thats funny
what is it with Joey's getting called gay? this stupid kid kept calling me gay. he also kept saying 'haha, you love adams sister!' even though this was a fact and not funny at all, AND it was impossible for both things to be true...

lmao, i loved that! it was so great, i just love his answer! by the by, i really like your pen name, it's awesome.

this pleases me. very much. ^_^

Hehe, good story. But it's the truth, don't ask unless you want an answer.

oh another piece excellent writing, it would be hard to improve on such good work, all of your work's really good, don't put yourself down (or are you fishing for compliments! :) kidding!) but seriously all your work is really terrific

Funny...very funny

IN YOUR FACE! I forgotsed to say in my last review that you're a good writer just in general, words have a good flow... all the sentences have subjects and predicates.. But I LIKE this story. short, sweet, and to the point. Very pointy. pointy. yeah...

:: blinks::

haha! that was great! yet another unexpected twist! bwahah...




Puck

LOL. That was charming. I love when stupid people like her get put in their place.

LMAO! Whoa, you totally showed a cruel bit of high school. As a freshman, and avid hater of preps and cheerleaders, you get a chocolate chip cookie for your fic!

By the by, when FFN.net decides that orignal fics should be on their other site, what will happen? Do we have to make new profiles and pennames? Do we have to scream in both profiles to read our fanfics and orginal fics? AHH!!

I say that we just get spoons and go eye gouge happy! Mwhahahahahahaha.....

What the hell do you think you're doing not continuing this story??!! This is too awesome! You should really write a following chapter...please oh please do that! :D

What the hell do you think you're doing not continuing this story??!! This is too awesome! You should really write a following chapter...please oh please do that! :D