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| wahey 2005-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethat i think, is probably one of the funniest and most truthfully brutal things i've read in ages! also, flaws in exactly the right places. although i think you could have imrpoved by writing a bit more. are ya gonna be experimenting more with the joey character? he is *so* cute. |
| Posed to Death 2004-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseLMFAO. What the hell. That's like a slap in the face and a bucket on the head filled with ice water. Greatness. |
| Demon-Slayer5 2004-06-27 ch 1,  | abusefunny i love it it's funny |
| GameFreak7744 2004-04-16 ch 1, | abusehehe. thats funny what is it with Joey's getting called gay? this stupid kid kept calling me gay. he also kept saying 'haha, you love adams sister!' even though this was a fact and not funny at all, AND it was impossible for both things to be true... |
| Ever Be 2003-11-01 ch 1, | abuselmao, i loved that! it was so great, i just love his answer! by the by, i really like your pen name, it's awesome. |
| newtypeshadow 2003-10-17 ch 1, | abusethis pleases me. very much. ^_^ |
| Gauy 2003-06-19 ch 1, | abuseHehe, good story. But it's the truth, don't ask unless you want an answer. |
| suicidel angel 2003-06-06 ch 1, | abuseoh another piece excellent writing, it would be hard to improve on such good work, all of your work's really good, don't put yourself down (or are you fishing for compliments! :) kidding!) but seriously all your work is really terrific |
| Ulfr 2003-04-28 ch 1, | abuseFunny...very funny |
| the mary 2003-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseIN YOUR FACE! I forgotsed to say in my last review that you're a good writer just in general, words have a good flow... all the sentences have subjects and predicates.. But I LIKE this story. short, sweet, and to the point. Very pointy. pointy. yeah... |
| demonic-muses 2003-03-30 ch 1, | abuse:: blinks:: haha! that was great! yet another unexpected twist! bwahah... Puck |
| Cheyenne 2003-03-08 ch 1, | abuseLOL. That was charming. I love when stupid people like her get put in their place. |
| Broadwaypoetess *LaBloodyRo... 2003-02-09 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! Whoa, you totally showed a cruel bit of high school. As a freshman, and avid hater of preps and cheerleaders, you get a chocolate chip cookie for your fic! By the by, when FFN.net decides that orignal fics should be on their other site, what will happen? Do we have to make new profiles and pennames? Do we have to scream in both profiles to read our fanfics and orginal fics? AHH!! I say that we just get spoons and go eye gouge happy! Mwhahahahahahaha..... |
| Joey 2003-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat the hell do you think you're doing not continuing this story??!! This is too awesome! You should really write a following chapter...please oh please do that! :D |
| Joey 2003-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat the hell do you think you're doing not continuing this story??!! This is too awesome! You should really write a following chapter...please oh please do that! :D |