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| hypnotic13 2004-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseexcellent this is so good ur imagery is just perfect sweet man. |
| Amethyst Haze 2003-07-14 ch 1,  | abuse::shivers:: Really good poem, such a good use of dark imagery. |
| Moonwinges 2003-03-06 ch 1, | abuse*shivers* Spooky, but it's very hard to relate to. What haunted wood? Is this a metaphor? This would make a great story. ^_^ |
| Lothe 2003-01-21 ch 1, | abuse*nod nod* This is not a bad poem, not at all. The carefully-elicited imagery is the high point, and the premise is intriguing--it would be interesting to see this idea turned into some kind of one-shot original fiction. ~Lothe |
| QuillKitten 2003-01-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! wonderful imagery! It was so clear in my head, though a bit morbid. I loved it! The way you played with the words gave it an eerie effect that I thought made the poem creepy. Great job! |
| clifjumpr13 2003-01-12 ch 1, | abuseJust a wee bit creepy there, aren't ya lass? Very vivid images, especially of the phantom's long pain. Nothing specific that I can whine about, though a few sentences were a bit awkward, but I can't really think (most of the time) this early in the morning to offer corrections, so I'll just leave it at that. By the way, thanks for the review, more is always welcome (subtle hint). |
| Ellerfru 2002-12-19 ch 1, | abusecool :) |